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by Elizabeth Saloka on April 3rd, 2009

Sure, someday you’ll have a free decade or two to tackle the mountain of books out there on web writing. Until then, use this nice, basic list of web writing best practices to tack on your wall:

  • Trim fat. Keep your content short and sweet. (Would say more about this, but, you know.)
  • Stay focused. As you’re writing, stop yourself every once and awhile and revisit your topic sentence. Ask yourself: Is what I’m writing relevant? Delete what’s unnecessary and retool what’s awkward.
  • Don’t exceed 60 words per paragraph. Doing this will make your readers’ eyes want to jump out of their sockets. True story. 
  • Honor thy bulleted lists. Three items? Perhaps you should bullet. Ten items? Definitely bullet. This will help your readers quickly assess, divide, and digest information. 
  • Avoid fantastic, wonderful fluff and cutting-edge, innovative corporate-speak. Readers can smell it a mile away. They don’t like it. It’s just a big, dumb, useless mountain in between the user and what they want.
  • Speak to the audience as ‘you.’ Make them feel special, like you’re speaking directly to them. Remember, conversational. If you went to check into a hotel, a friendly concierge would say “Here’s the key to your room. Hope your stay is pleasant.” A not-as-nice concierge would bark “Here’s the key to the room. Hope the stay is crap.” (The crap bit was for emphasis. But you get the point, right?)
  • Divide and conquer existing content. Sometimes a content expert will give you information for the About Us section that would actually be more useful in the Jobs section. Or, a sentence won’t fit with the rest of a paragraph. Don’t assume the person who put it there was smarter than you. Move it! When reorganizing existing paragraphs or forming new ones, a good rule of thumb is to use the inverted pyramid style.
  • Talk like a human. If you’re writing for an established brand, by all means use their existing tone—if that’s what the client hired you to do. If you’re hired to create a new tone, that’s great. Do that. But in all instances make sure you don’t sacrifice clarity for cleverness. Also, don’t get overly grammatical. Sometimes it’s better to break a few grammar rules than to sound stuffy.
  • Stay grounded. Don’t fall in love with your writing. You’ll lose perspective. And, you’ll probably be less open to constructive client feedback.
  • Stay active. Jog twice a week. Heeeyyyoooo! Seriously, though, use active voice. Say, “She rocked the content.” Not, “The content was rocked by her.” Active voice sounds more conversational and offers less potential for confusion. Make sense? Good!

Want to dig deeper? Check out Kristina’s book recommendations.

  • Thomas Hallett
    Another quick one: Keep bullet points short - if your bullet points are more than a couple lines or sentences long consider breaking up with subheadings instead...
  • shannon
    Thank you! I've been passing this on to my coworkers for years, but the validation adds credibility.
  • shannon
    AND the search engines love this stuff, too.
  • Love this. I've started many an editorial style guide with this bit: "Thoreau instructed 'simplify, simplify.' You can do him one better." Here's to snappy writing that gets to the point and knows when to stop!
  • Great list. I am looking forward to the death of "innovative corporate-speak." I think we are on our way!
  • Digestible content is something I focused on strongly as a copy editor and designer at newspapers, and it's been a great skill to have outside of that industry. Excellent tips!
  • Mark Jackson
    In your opinion, does the active personalised style (speak to the audience as ‘you’) apply when the subject is technical?
  • Elizabeth Saloka
    Hi Mark,
    Great question. I'd say addressing users as 'you' is always appropriate, unless:
    A) It comes off as awkward, patronizing, or judgmental to the user.
    B) You're not actually speaking to the intended user.
    Remember, whenever you face a content quandary, you can ask this question: What would I want if I were the user?
    Hope this helps!
  • This is great. One of the few articles I've seen that practices what it preaches.
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