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	<title>Comments on: Web Writing for Dummies, Smarties, Oldies, and Newbies</title>
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		<title>By: Rachel</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-713</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 22:35:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is great. One of the few articles I&#039;ve seen that practices what it preaches.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is great. One of the few articles I&#39;ve seen that practices what it preaches.</p>
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		<title>By: Rachel</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-434</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 15:35:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is great. One of the few articles I&#039;ve seen that practices what it preaches.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is great. One of the few articles I&#39;ve seen that practices what it preaches.</p>
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		<title>By: Elizabeth Saloka</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-284</link>
		<dc:creator>Elizabeth Saloka</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 22:40:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Mark,
Great question. I&#039;d say addressing users as &#039;you&#039; is always appropriate, unless:
A) It comes off as awkward, patronizing, or judgmental to the user.
B) You&#039;re not actually speaking to the intended user.
Remember, whenever you face a content quandary, you can ask this question: What would I want if I were the user?
Hope this helps!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Mark,<br />
Great question. I&#8217;d say addressing users as &#8216;you&#8217; is always appropriate, unless:<br />
A) It comes off as awkward, patronizing, or judgmental to the user.<br />
B) You&#8217;re not actually speaking to the intended user.<br />
Remember, whenever you face a content quandary, you can ask this question: What would I want if I were the user?<br />
Hope this helps!</p>
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		<title>By: Mark Jackson</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-285</link>
		<dc:creator>Mark Jackson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 11:10:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In your opinion, does the active personalised style (speak to the audience as ‘you’) apply when the subject is technical?
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In your opinion, does the active personalised style (speak to the audience as ‘you’) apply when the subject is technical?</p>
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		<title>By: Jamie Maldonado</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-286</link>
		<dc:creator>Jamie Maldonado</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Apr 2009 13:51:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Digestible content is something I focused on strongly as a copy editor and designer at newspapers, and it&#039;s been a great skill to have outside of that industry. Excellent tips!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Digestible content is something I focused on strongly as a copy editor and designer at newspapers, and it&#8217;s been a great skill to have outside of that industry. Excellent tips!</p>
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		<title>By: Nell Kauls</title>
		<link>http://blog.braintraffic.com/2009/04/web-writing-for-dummies-smarties-oldies-and-newbies/comment-page-1/#comment-287</link>
		<dc:creator>Nell Kauls</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Apr 2009 21:36:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great list. I am looking forward to the death of &quot;innovative corporate-speak.&quot; I think we are on our way!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great list. I am looking forward to the death of &#8220;innovative corporate-speak.&#8221; I think we are on our way!</p>
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		<title>By: Margot Bloomstein</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margot Bloomstein</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 19:58:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love this. I&#039;ve started many an editorial style guide with this bit: &quot;Thoreau instructed &#039;simplify, simplify.&#039; You can do him one better.&quot; Here&#039;s to snappy writing that gets to the point and knows when to stop!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love this. I&#8217;ve started many an editorial style guide with this bit: &#8220;Thoreau instructed &#8217;simplify, simplify.&#8217; You can do him one better.&#8221; Here&#8217;s to snappy writing that gets to the point and knows when to stop!</p>
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		<title>By: shannon</title>
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		<dc:creator>shannon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 16:57:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>AND the search engines love this stuff, too.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>AND the search engines love this stuff, too.</p>
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		<title>By: shannon</title>
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		<dc:creator>shannon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 16:55:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you! I&#039;ve been passing this on to my coworkers for years, but the validation adds credibility.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! I&#8217;ve been passing this on to my coworkers for years, but the validation adds credibility.</p>
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		<title>By: Thomas Hallett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Thomas Hallett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 16:21:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another quick one: Keep bullet points short - if your bullet points are more than a couple lines or sentences long consider breaking up with subheadings instead...
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